BBC school report draft D.I.R.T

20th February 2017

Anchor

 We now come to you with a special report about on how important the RNLI are so and how a lot more lives would be lost if they didn't exist.The RNLI are especially important to our cornwall because of our extensive coastline. 

Reporters part

The RNLI are so important to our county of cornwall because live right next to the sea and the water is a very dangerous place because without anyone to stop you from putting your life in danger so just incase that does happen the RNLI are there to help you and make sure you don't do them things.The RNLI get 94% of the total income comes from donations and so our lifesaving service relies on the generosity of supporters but only less than 2% of the RNLI’s total funding comes from government sources.

we are now going to go into A tragic event happend in September 2016 were a man and daughter died when they went on rocks with the family of five when they go hit off the rocks by a wave the RNLI managed to save them but a the Father died on the beach and daughter died in hospital a few days after the incident.

news school report

L/O: To research and plan an effective news report                                                                     19/1/17

A man has died after he and his family were swept off a beach in Cornwall by huge waves, despite a sea rescue by lifeboat volunteers. The man was with a woman and a two-year-old child when they got into trouble off Fistral beach, Newquay, on the county’s northwest coast, at about 5.20pm on Friday.

Lifeguards managed to rescue all three people but the man died in hospital, the Maritime and Coastguard Agency said.

Two Newquay RNLI lifeboats, Fistral RNLI lifeguards, the Newquay coastguard rescue team, the police, the air ambulance and the ambulance service all attended the scene, local media reported.

“RNLI lifeguards rescued a woman using their jetski and a man and two-year-old child were recovered from the sea by an RNLI lifeboat,” a coastguard spokesman said.

How they get there funding

Less than 2% of the RLNI's total funding comes from government sources. 

As a charity, 94% of their total income comes from the generosity of the RLNI supporters.

Interview question

1. What is your favourite part of the job and why?

2. What was your best moment in the RLNI?

3. How long have you volunteered for the RLNI?

4. What does it feel like after you have saved someones life?

5. Where do you think the RLNI will end up in the future?

6.  How long is a normal working day?

7. How long do you normally keep a boat for?

8. What safety advice do you want to give to people about the coastline?

Anchor

we will introduce ourselves then say how the RLNI are so important and how a lot more lives would be lost if they didn't exist. then we will give an example of the father and daughter who got swept off some rocks at a beach in Cornwall and sadly they both died, the father was pronounced dead when he arrived at hospital and the daughter sadly died in hospital...

News and Audience

Donald Trump blasts 'fools' who oppose good Russian ties

BMW 'absolutely committed' to a new Mexican plant

The US Air Force's commuter drone warriors

Met officers to be asked if they want to carry guns

January Tube strike

plymouth drawing with Liverpool

terror attacks in jerusalem 

London tube workers on strike

La La land sweeps golden globe

Mcdonalds agrees china franchise sale

local news

teenagers who climbed Tamar bridge 

St Blazey shotgun attack cat has leg amputated 

dolphins filmed swimming in St Ives harbour 

gunshots *fired over cornwall hunt riders*

plymouth drawing with Liverpool

target audience 

newsround - kids 4 and up

bbc 10 o'clock news - adults 16+

spotlight - adults 16+

Newsround is for children so it can't be about terror attacks and politics because thats not suitable but a story about red pandas playing in snow is suitable for news round but not the 10 o'clock news.

16th January 2017
I think the first news story on BBC radio one 10am news will start with:
Donald trump says "uk doing great" after Brexit vote

1. 3.Exeter MP calls for PM to break her silence over Trump and Russia
2. 4.ponies being poisoned by old tin mines
3. 2.two roads in plymouth closed after traffic accidents
4. 1.somerset stroke charity fighting to keep funding 
5. 5.people of bride port took part in tradition of wassailing:singing to trees for a good harvest
6. 6.weather 

possible news stories

1.Bodmin student to attempt to break world record 

2.UK military building laser weapon

3.Bodmin nature reserve in danger 

4.Tom Butler interview (big wave surfer)

5.Rebecca Puckey wins music crown comp

6.New bike park in Cornwall 
7.Impact of Bodmin roadworks 
8.PA might be moving to championship
9.Tulip uses hawks to cull seagulls
10.Bodmin steam railway joining main line
11.world pasty championships
12.st Pirans day celebration

school report ideas

5th January 2016

school report ideas:

Bodmin steam train expansion

the importance of the RNLI

we can talk about how we need the RLNI and if we didn't there would be a much higher death toll 

Photography Circuit

These are my favourite pictures from the ones we took this lesson:This is my favourite portrait picture because it has used good lighting and has captured a very good pose. this is my favourite close up as it looks as if the cars are actually moving and the yellow one looks as if its wiped out, and it has a good colour palette.

this is my favourite symmetry photo as the chairs are equal and the walkway is like the line between two symmetrical objects what makes it look pretty cool.

























this is my favourite leading lines photo as the stair well has natural lines.

magazine cover DIRT response

 HI

i have done grammar corrections and thats all but i think it looks a lot better with the grammar corrections.

final magazine cover

Peer assessed By Aidan

WWW: Good use of colour palette.

NTT: Better image, too fuzzy

                                                SELF ASSESSED
                           I  agree with everything Aidan has said

                          WWW: a lot of detail
                          NTT: have a better image